Yes, I do see, but I wonder if the dual POV is serving you?

For workshops on character development, relationships, or other specific subjects, email me at

I teach at the University of Alberta, Augustana, in Humber College’s online Writing Program, and at the Banff Centre. In July, join me for an intensive week of Historical Fiction at the U of T’s Summer School for Creative Writing.

To find a course that might be right for you, check one of the links below.

Banff Centre for the Arts

Humber School for Creative Writing

University of Toronto Summer School of Creative Writing

(the W.S. Merwin excerpt on the main page is from his poem “Berryman”)